Spin. Click. Pass.

by JMSquire

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Spin. Click. Pass.

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think this is very well done.
    Not entirely sure about this sentence though: “The empty bottle of JD we’d split sat in the middle of our circle, on top was that wooden box…” On top of what? Other than that, great job. The last line is a killer.

  2. Spin. Click. Pass.

    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree. The last line was ahmazing. Very well written.

  3. Spin. Click. Pass.

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That last line is a killer!
    Very nicely done. I could picture the scene in my head perfectly.

  4. Spin. Click. Pass.

    JMSquire's Buddy Icon JMSquire

    Posted 3 months ago

    Thanks guys, I was really uncertain about this one so it’s awesome that you liked it. 8D
    @John Perkins: The line in question used to be _”...balanced on top of it was that…” but I had cut it down to fit the character limit. It was tough to make this one stay under for certain.

  5. Spin. Click. Pass.

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Suicide chic? Most hardcore afterschool club ever? Either way, nicely done.

  6. Spin. Click. Pass.

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The Breakfast club meets Russian roulette. The details sell the story and the last line is incredible.

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