Viva La Vida

by Bartimaeus

The music poured into my ears. So glorious it was as if I could fly…
I haven’t laughed so genuinely for ages, as my thoughts blended with the colors of the evening sky, and the elegant music brought back the doused fire of my soul.

I can’t explain it, but this wonderful feeling of absolute peace did not come from where I thought it would… In fact, it came from a place I didn’t even know had ever existed.

My breath is taken away as the fire inside of me swirls my thoughts around you... Of all people, I never would’ve thought it would be you...

But I guess that doesn’t matter, because I find myself wearing the grandest smile whenever I think about you. When I lay my head down to rest at the end of the day and gaze upon the moon’s luminescence, it’s your face I picture. I don’t know what to call this feeling, but whatever it may be, it has brought me back…

Thank you…

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Viva La Vida

    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 3 months ago

    I named it Viva La Vida because that song simply makes me feel epic... and it sort of goes along with how im expressing my feelings here.

  2. Viva La Vida

    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Haha, I’m guessing you’re a Coldplay fan. Nice job, though! I think all of us who enjoy music can relate.
    LoA

  3. Viva La Vida

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hooray for Coldplay! Nicely done, Bartimaeus. I could really relate to this.

  4. Viva La Vida

    Just another writer's Buddy Icon Just another writer

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    you told me you’d written a story with the song! i love this! you’re expressions are shown so vividly and I just gosh darn love it lil boy!

  5. Viva La Vida

    ♥Reel_Nice♥'s Buddy Icon ♥Reel_Nice♥

    Posted 3 months ago

    HO-RAY fo Coldplay!!! =D

  6. Viva La Vida

    Emmyful's Buddy Icon Emmyful

    Posted 3 months ago

    Wow! It really painted a picture for me. By the way, I bought the new Coldplay cd as soon as it hit Itunes. I get so lost in the music. It’s absolutely amazing!

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