Tears

by brunettechick

Tears welled in my eyes. As hard as I tried, I couldn’t hold them back. People were watching but I didn’t care because he had just shattered my heart , which was the only thing of value I had left. What hurt worse was that he didn’t even care. Without hesitation I hurriedly made my way to the bathroom. Tears now flowed freely and mascara ran down the sides of my cheeks. I heard the bathroom door open and turned my head. There stood my best friend. She was always there for me but she could never mend my heart. As only a best friend could, she embraced me and whispered words of hope into my ear.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Tears

    Michael Devin's Buddy Icon Michael Devin

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    The writing so far is pretty good. Simple, clear sentence structure. Emotionally vulnerable without being pathetic. Keep going.

  2. Tears

    French Toast's Buddy Icon French Toast

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    pretty good, and the break-up storyline is very relatable.

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