Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]

by Ana Cristina

1978 had been a pretty good year so far, Dolly thought to herself as she arrived in Miami. Hopefully, it would be getting even better soon. It was a unseasonably cool October afternoon, making her wish she’d brought a coat when she stepped off the plane.

In an hour she would be meeting a man that she knew only from letters and pictures. His name was Ricky and he was the cousin of her best friend, China.

In no time, Dolly was parking her rental car outside Ricky’s house. She’d followed the address exactly as he’d given it to her, copying the directions on the last page of Love in the Time of Cholera, the only thing she had lying near the phone when he called.

As she walked up the paved drive, she hummed “Let it Be” softly under her breath. The seven gold bangles on her wrist jingled merrily. She sure hoped Ricky was a family guy because she wanted lots of kids someday. She hoped he liked literature, too, because she loved to read. These were the thoughts floating in Dolly’s head as she rang the doorbell.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Cute moment, and all the thrown in details actually worked well to give it some additional depth and a feeling of reality.

  2. Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]

    BernerOberland's Buddy Icon BernerOberland

    Posted 2 months ago

    Cool, romance, curious to know the rest..
    Figured out most of the clues.. is Dolly of China the pet, or you were born in China..

  3. Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    Nope, wasn’t born in China, but rather the good old U.S. of A. ;-) Although, Dolly was my first pet, so you got that right.

  4. Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That’s really cute! It kind of shocked me when I read your favorite song, seeing as that’s is that is playing on my iPod right now! =)
    LoA

  5. Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    Was Family Guy the sitcom by any chance?

    That was a nice little ficlet!

  6. Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    Yeah, I can’t get enough of that Stewie. :p

  7. Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]

    Melia's Buddy Icon Melia

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    1978
    China
    Miami
    Ricky
    Love in the time of Cholera
    Let it Be
    Seven
    Dolly
    Literature
    Family Guy
    I love this challenge so much :) I haven’t read the other comments yet. These are just my guesses.

  8. Pretty Good Year [Scavenger Hunt Challenge]

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    You are quite the sleuth! Only two mistakes: Dolly was my first pet and believe it or not, my nickname is “China,” pronounced the Spanish way, cheena, because apparently I look Chinese to my family and friends.
    Glad you like the challenge! I’m having fun just trying to figure out everybody’s clues.

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