Bagman: Feathery Hammer

by JLaughter

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  1. Bagman: Feathery Hammer

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I have a feeling this is going to get ugly!

  2. Bagman: Feathery Hammer

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Well that certainly can’t be good.
    This was a great three piece set. Having the explosion take place from the pilot’s perspective worked really well, tying in all four of your main characters.

  3. Bagman: Feathery Hammer

    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 3 months ago

    @Pyro: Heh, you’re most probably very right, sir.
    @John: Thanks, I’m trying to figure out exactly where I’m going to tie in the police character I introduced a few entries back, but so far this is really shaping out well.

  4. Bagman: Feathery Hammer

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I have to say, you really got me with that last line! I didn’t see it coming and it was great!
    Looking forward to see where you go next… I’m really digging this story.

  5. Bagman: Feathery Hammer

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Whoops, forgot about that guy. He hasn’t been around very long though. So, I don’t feel too bad about forgetting him. I still think of these four as the main characters, even though Red hasn’t had a story from her perspective.
    I suppose your cop could get the call from the explosion, or maybe he’s on his way home from a shift, and happens to drive by?

  6. Bagman: Feathery Hammer

    Browncoatben's Buddy Icon Browncoatben

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ismail says: “I’m the Juggernaut, bitch!”

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