um...no title... sowwy! (scavenger hunt challenge)

by Mask By The Moon

Molly looked up at the lanky girl and her friend walking past.

“Memphis, that’s impossible. No one would be able to make chocolate appear out of nowhere.”

“A witch could.”

“Not a real one. They can’t just make things appear.”

“How would you know?”

“Shadow’s wiccan.”

“Oh, of course. Shadow’s the most important person that you’ve never told me about!”

“Memphis, for the 47th time! Shadow has so many names you keep getting them mixed up! Jimmy, Shadow, Wolf, Spike… see what I’m getting at?”

“Oh, your boy toy!”

“Oh, shut up. This is just a game to you, isn’t it?”

“Maybe… how much money you got on you? I’m starving!”

“Saving money is easy. Figure it out. I’ve got $19.96.”

“You know I’ve never been good at creative writing!”

“What? Oh, why do I talk to such inferior individuals?”

“What did you call me?”

“Nothing. Ooh! Dude’s reading Inkheart!

“Go spoil the ending!”

“Nah, I’ll be nice. I’m not that mean. Let’s go to my house. Home Improvement’s on.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. um...no title... sowwy! (scavenger hunt challenge)

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, another great job! And here I was thinking this challenge would be hard! I could maybe guess one or two of your clues, it was that well done. And bonus points for keeping it almost entirely in dialogue!

  2. um...no title... sowwy! (scavenger hunt challenge)

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 3 months ago

    o.o I could have sworn at least four were obvious.

  3. um...no title... sowwy! (scavenger hunt challenge)

    BernerOberland's Buddy Icon BernerOberland

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Cool dialouge.

  4. um...no title... sowwy! (scavenger hunt challenge)

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I so love Inkheart!! Great ficlet!

  5. um...no title... sowwy! (scavenger hunt challenge)

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 3 months ago

    1.) year = 1996
    2.) pet = shadow/spike
    3.) birthplace = memphis
    4.) best friend = jimmy
    5.) book = inkheart
    6.) song = no idea
    7.) number = 47
    8.) nickname = molly
    9.) subject = creative writing
    10.) sitcom = home improvement
    how’d i do?

  6. um...no title... sowwy! (scavenger hunt challenge)

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 3 months ago

    Wow invisiblity…

    I only got some of those!

    Great job on the ficlet!

  7. um...no title... sowwy! (scavenger hunt challenge)

    Melia's Buddy Icon Melia

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is so much fun :) Great dialogue here! I’m going through without looking at the comments before I guess so here goes:

    1-1996, 2-Shadow, 3-Memphis, 4-Wolf, 5-Inkheart, 6-Boy Toy?, 7-47, 8-Molly, 9-Creative Writing, 10-Home Improvement

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