An interesting impasse here. Dying to see where this goes next!

electrifying! I’m shaking to see what happens! I’m freaking out here!

The tension is palpable. Well crafted.

A very tense scene with an interesting final word from Dennis.

It is, indeed, very tense. I’m on the edge of my seat here…what’s going to happen?

“I think we should all take a moment, pause for a deep, cleansing breath,â€? he said in dulcet tones despite his menacing intent> what a paragraph that is..and the pacing in this one was as fast as the one b4 it was slow motion.. you know to grap a readers atention with dialouge and detail.