A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

by Blusparrow

I go crazy, crazy, baby, I go crazy
You turn it on then you’re gone
Yeah you drive me
Crazy, crazy, crazy, for you baby

The music blares out of the stereo and I sing along. My cell phone rings.

1(248)-888-1991

Who is that? I think as I answer.

“Hello?”
“Hi, is this Dott?”
“Yes, and who is this?”
“Taylor, from math.”

My mouth drops open. I have had crush on Taylor all year.

“Who gave you my number?”
“Penny.”
“Oh really,” I say with anger in my voice.
“I was wondering..,” he takes a big breath, “Will you go out with me?”
“Yes!”
“Ok! I will pick you up at eight on friday.”
“I can’t wait, bye!”
“Bye!”

I hang up and start dancing in my room. Suddenly I slip on a book “Shadow Horse” and fall. I get up , Thank heavens no one was watching, and squeal in excitement. I lay on my bed, totally forgetting I am missing my show, “Deadliest Catch”. I wonder where he will take me? Detroit Cinnema for a movie? La Blu for Dinner? Oh my gosh I can’t believe this! am I dreaming?!

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think I spotted all the clues, but that’s only because I was looking for them. =) Cute little story! Oh, and when writing dialogue, all punctuation should go inside the quotation marks.

  2. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    oh ya, the comma, my bad.
    LoA

  3. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is really good! Great job, Blu!

  4. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is really good! Great job, Blu!

  5. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is really good! Great job, Blu!

  6. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 2 months ago

    um… deadliest catch isn’t a sitcom.

  7. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    I’m having a hard time finding quite a few. But reading through these certainly makes me feel older than normal.

  8. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    so what if Deadliest Catch isn’t a sitcom, I like it, too! LOL Way to stick up for Discovery Channel! I usually don’t watch sitcoms….

  9. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    I don’t care if Deadliesst Catch isn’t a sitcom! I don’t watch most of them..
    LoA

  10. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    most of the sitcoms anyway. They all look like soap oprahs that only show once a week or less…
    LoA

  11. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Deadliest Catch is addicting.. this is a very cool challenge.

  12. A Dream Come True (Scavenger Hunt Challenge)

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thats cute =]=]
    I think I got most of the clues
    great job!

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