Too Many Spare Parts

by The Unnamable

Shrouded in a cloud of swirling grey-blue dust, I leaned against the shop window and took another drag on the glowing filtration stick. Been trying to give ‘em up for years and upgrade to an internal model, but I like to have something to do with my hands.

I blew a dust ring and pierced it with an arrow as I glanced up and down the street. Finny’s part of the Hub wasn’t the best, but what was these days? Four-credit pleasure droids hummed under the corner streetlight. Shrill binary voices shot into the street from some apartment. Probably arguing about exorbitant electric bills.

I checked the sign over my head again. Flashing red: “Finny’s Spare Parts.” I shook my head and wondered if anybot could logically prove that for nanosecond.

What was taking Finn so long? I re-ran the audio recording. “Meet me outside at 11:45.22, ya lousy bastid. I gotta check on inventory.”

11.47.29. I jimmied open the back door. The rusty runt was on the floor—nothing but a pool of wires and cooling fluid.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Too Many Spare Parts

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Another cool entry into this series. A couple of odd grammar issues, but a really interesting story that just seems to be getting more intriguing.

  2. Too Many Spare Parts

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love the idea of robots smoking. BTW I sequeled.

  3. Too Many Spare Parts

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Uh-oh. We’ve got some foul play.

  4. Too Many Spare Parts

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 3 months ago

    Love the way the “neighborhood” is described, pleasure bots, binary voices. And Finney sounds like a shifty used car salesman, who just got what he deserved. :)

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!