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Remembering Leaving

by Dreamer

“I was…” It was so difficult, so impossible to continue, but I did, my voice so quiet I wondered if he could even hear it, “I was sick of the bruises.” I was crying again, turning away from him.
The silence was deafening. The only sound was an occasional sniffle from me as I tried to make the tears go away. It was ridiculous to cry, I was stronger than that.
“Bruises?” his voice was soft, he was standing indecisively in the middle of the kitchen, half-reaching forward, as though he wanted to comfort me, but he didn’t know how, or if he should.
“My father,” I spat the word, “Does not agree with me on several subjects. His temper is short, and his reactions are often violent. I managed to lie to myself long enough, giving him excuses in my head. Work was difficult; his last movie had gotten bad reviews; his views were logical: I should go into the movie business or whatever he wanted. But I didn’t want to, and he couldn’t stand it,” I sobbed, “So he’d hit me. And finally, after one night, I left.”

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  1. Remembering Leaving

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wait did he hit her on more than one night or was it after one night of being hit that she left? And how terrible for her. No wonder she ran away.

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    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Go Paige for getting out of there. Though I have the same question, it seems like he hit her on more than one night but I’m not sure.

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    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 5 months ago

    Wait to go Paige!
    LoA

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh wow, poor Paige… I had a feeling she was experiencing that kind of abuse, but still it’s a powerful moment at the end when she admits it.

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