Hanging By The Moment

by Writer4Life00nj

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I see you. Just sitting there, looking as perfect as could be. Doing nothing, just sitting. Letting the wind blow through your hair. I’m just sitting. Sitting here doing nothing. Starring at you. Wondering if your thinking I’m perfect. It made everything better, as I sat there alone. Wondering about you. Wondering how much fun everyone else was having, but me. I watched as all my friends giggled and laughed together, not caring how I felt. Then, I looked over at you. Wondering if you wished I was okay. Everything seemed to be in slow motion. As the minutes ticked by, still feeling the same. You still sitting there, doing the same. Wondering how the day would turn out I sat there. Doing nothing, tears in my eyes. Stomach churning not just from the sickening amusement park rides, but from worrying. Worrying if you would say anything as you walked by. My whole entire body shaking, not just because I had Jello legs from the roller coasters, but shaking as you walked by and left me to hang by the moment.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Hanging By The Moment

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I used to and sometimes do that when my ex walks past me. I don’t cry ( much different relationship we had), but I get a bit nervous because there was so much drama surrounding us. Some of my friends here on ficlets know that, if they remember anyway. Enough about me, good ficlet that appearently people can relate to. I also probably just wrote more than you needed to know.
    LoA

  2. Hanging By The Moment

    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted 2 months ago

    lol its okay, thats no exactly the meaning of my story though, its about a crush (:

  3. Hanging By The Moment

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I could relate to this, too. :( What girl can’t, unfortunately?
    Some slight spelling mistakes, but otherwise good. For example, in some sentences you write “your” when you should write “you’re.”

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