Waiting, Hoping, Dreaming, Wishing

by Blusparrow

You started out as my friend. We got to know each other and had fun. Then against my mind’s thoughts, I wanted to become so much more to you.

I don’t know if you feel the same. You make me laugh and I wonder if I phase you. You make me smile and I wonder if I make you smile. I think about you and wonder if you ever think about me. I dream about you and I hope you dream about me.

I am siting by the phone waiting for your call. Waiting for you to tell me you want me. Waiting for you to tell me I am all you dream about. Waiting for you to say that I am all you see.

Will anything ever happen? I don’t know. Will I ever get the courage to call you? Probably not. For now I am hoping, wishing, dreaming, and waiting for you.

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  1. Waiting, Hoping, Dreaming, Wishing

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very realistic questions for someone to have in that kind of a situation! I like the use of repetition throughout. e.g.: Waiting for…

  2. Waiting, Hoping, Dreaming, Wishing

    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted 2 months ago

    love it! This is a great ficlet! I can totally relate!

  3. Waiting, Hoping, Dreaming, Wishing

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I ditto all the above. Very realistic, very relatable.
    LoA

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    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Boys, they never call! I think you missed a single “I” in “I wonder if phase you.”. It’s not apparent because the line breaks there. Otherwise very well written and as Ana pointed out the repetition really lets you feel the longing.

  5. Waiting, Hoping, Dreaming, Wishing

    problematique <3's Buddy Icon problematique <3

    Posted 2 months ago

    is this a true story

  6. Waiting, Hoping, Dreaming, Wishing

    problematique <3's Buddy Icon problematique <3

    Posted 2 months ago

    is this a true story

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