It's Cold Here

by Scarlet Rawr

The world was cold. An accident, she was born into a broken home. Parents broken up before she was born. Her father didn’t want her so her mother took care. Two sisters later her mother was always gone. Her stepfather feigned responsibility for the three. After seven years her absent father came back and wanted his child. Disowned by her stepfather, she was taken from her mother by this stranger. They got to know each other. But maybe he wanted to know her a bit too well. The next four years consisted of happiness and abuse, two things that rarely go together. He abandoned her at age twelve, dropping her off at her mother’s empty house Christmas Eve. She found love and mental instability. In just one year she had gone through four therapists and hospitalized seven times for her own stupidity. Finally she realizes the pain of living and wonders what it’s like dying. But it’s cold here too.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. It's Cold Here

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very deep, and well done. I thought I was reading an “I’ve been abused, the world is so dark and doesn’t understand me” story, but the last line, in my opinion made the story. I had to read the last line twice to make sure I got it.

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