The clouds all played fetch

by JMSquire

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The clouds all played fetch

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yeah, I wasn’t buying the fact that Kari would so easily acquiesce and just hand over the money. I’m glad you wrote that ending. It’s more “in character.”

  2. The clouds all played fetch

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Alright, now we’re getting somewhere. I agree with Ana, this family is much too dysfunctional for her to just give up the cash.

  3. The clouds all played fetch

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I for three agree that this was the way to go with the ending. But, man oh man, this family is messed up if they’re throwing bats and pulling guns on each other.

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