The clouds all rolled over

by JMSquire

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  1. The clouds all rolled over

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This sentence had me wondering about these siblings’ history: His face contorted in pain, but this being the fourth time his sister had shot him during the 26 years he had been alive, he didn’t cry out because he knew if he didn’t answer her question quickly she would just shoot him again.
    This is some tense writing here.

  2. The clouds all rolled over

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Well, now he’s just gonna have to rob her more to get the money to pay for the window.

  3. The clouds all rolled over

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, he must be a real jerk and idiot to get shot 4 times by his sister. That detail really makes you want to know more about this crazy family.

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