The clouds all drooled

by JMSquire

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  1. The clouds all drooled

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Where you write “under his breathe,” it should read breath.
    This is a tense series you’ve got going here. It almost makes me uncomfortable to read it, but I feel compelled to to know what happens next. And the titles are suggestive and thought-provoking.

  2. The clouds all drooled

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Jeremy is not only an ass, but he’s stupid as well. Not a good idea to piss off people whom you are asking for help.
    And did that gun have a silencer? I would expect someone to come to his aid. Then again, not sure if I would.

  3. The clouds all drooled

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love that last paragraph/tirade against the 911 operator. This is so intense that you almost have to laugh to get threw it without feeling violated (in a good way).

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