In A Breath

by One Time, One Chance

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Inhale.

Taking in the sights around you.
The people behind you.
The memories behind you.
The water rippling below you.
The sun in front of you.
The wind whisking by you.
Taking in the truth.
The people behind you.
The memories behind you.
The words eating inside you.
The sun in front of you.
The wind whisking by you.

Exhale.

Jump.
And never come down.
Underwater.
And never come up.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. In A Breath

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow, beautiful! a little on the sad side.. but still beautiful.
    LoA

  2. In A Breath

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yes, band baby is right, it’s beautifully told but slightly tinged with sadness.

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