Chaos

by Never Explain

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“Of course there is no escape…..” I said, pulling out the handles of my energy swords. “There is only victory!”

In a flash of light, I split the air as two phosphorescently gray blades of concrete-meltingly hot plasma emerged from the hilts of my swords. Almost ready to attack, I reached into my coat and pulled out a vile of murky gray liquid that I loved to use especially with my swords. I injected the drug and the first stage took effect immediately.

Feeling a new high, I flew at my enemy, slicing both of their heads in a flurry of heat.

I whipped around and flew the other way, the second stage took effect. My skin caught on fire. I felt nothing, only the super-enhanced energy and power I always got, nothing else.

I left the tunnel seething behind me as I reached a wider space in the parking garage and I turned the parked vehicles into ashes as I unleashed the powers of my contained supernova.

“I do believe you dropped this vial, Mr. Mortimer.” A voice calmly boomed over the choas.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Chaos

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    What an exciting scene. I love how every time he kills one of them another pops up to calmly menace him. They kind of remind me of Agent Smith in The Matrix.

  2. Chaos

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very exciting. The only misstep I saw was how did he pull out a vial and inject himself while holding two energy swords?

  3. Chaos

    Never Explain's Buddy Icon Never Explain

    Posted 3 months ago

    ^^In response to thebetweenspace:

    Thats exactly the idea. I love Agent Smith!!!

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