Bagman: Take a Good Look

by JLaughter

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Bagman: Take a Good Look

    Browncoatben's Buddy Icon Browncoatben

    Posted 3 months ago

    Ah…the lady cop perspective gets a little meat.
    Another solid, gritty, descripting addition to the series.

  2. Bagman: Take a Good Look

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very solid continuation to the series… setting up for something interesting I assume :)

  3. Bagman: Take a Good Look

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love how the second paragraph sounds annoyed at the falling body. Like, “who the fuck is this asshole falling to his death on my car? Now I gotta clean that shit up. ‘Fuck you asshole.’” Yeah, that’s how I imagined her feeling and reacting.

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