I love how the second paragraph sounds annoyed at the falling body. Like, “who the fuck is this asshole falling to his death on my car? Now I gotta clean that shit up. ‘Fuck you asshole.’” Yeah, that’s how I imagined her feeling and reacting.
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Cerberus3 was illegal in almost every country and city-state that had laws. Just thinking about owning one was practically be…
I’ve always been an avid (dare I say: OBSESSED) reader, and started writing fiction somewhere around 5th or 6th grade. I read approximately 3 or 4 books a month, so new material is always a must!
I’ve written for a long time now, although the novel I started in high school has never gotten past the first draft stage. Over the last four years, I’ve fallen out of the habit of writing and I’m looking to ramp that up again.
I’m going to insert a shameless plug for my father. Jim Laughter and Victor J. Bretthauer recently published Escape to Destiny, and his book (and oncoming series) is available on tatepublishing.com!
Music You Should Try: The Dears, No Cities Left Sia, lots of albums…great voice.
Ficlet Series’ in Progress:
Bagman: a Cyberpunk series in the first-person narrative from different points of views. This series is rated Mature for drug-use, language, violence and strong sexual references. 30471 (in progress)
The Gerideon Chronicles: An experiment in writing in a classical style reminiscent of Sir Thomas Malory’s Le Morte D’Arthur.30988 (in progress)
Completed Ficlets
The Fog: My response to Ana Cristina’s Out of Order Challenge. 33175
Also check out my bro’s ficlets! Browncoatben! He’s not as good as me, but he wishes he was.
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