The Doctor

by Jimothy

He walked in, unnoticed by those in the waiting room. Their minds were on life and death, sickness and disease; far more important things than strangers milling about. He bled into the background without much effort.

Walking through the double doors, the flood of smells crashed a wave of memories. Each of these wards held his stories of being a doctor. Patients long past still seemed to speak from the walls. The mother who died giving birth, the police officer who had been shot, the poor child who was caught in the house fire. Those memories were still there, although they were slowly graying.

He approached the children’s ward. He had treated his own daughter in this same hospital, many years ago. Sadly with all his experience, with all the help from the nurses, he had been unable to save her. This was a bittersweet moment.

As a doctor, death scared him; as death, he took a strange pleasure in his job.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Doctor

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    Very cool. Kind of reminds me of an episode of “Dead Like Me.” I had guessed that the dude was dead, but the fact that he was a reaper took me by surprise.
    Well done, and thank you for entering.

  2. The Doctor

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 2 months ago

    Very cool.. very subtle ending.
    I like a good grim reaper story hehehe..

  3. The Doctor

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, interesting twist. But how does one become a reaper? Very cool.

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