1300 (Challenge By Numbers)

by Fantasy

“1300.”
He stood, his back to the soldier.

The soldier’s voice was shaky, “We’ve got none left.”

He President turned from the window. “How many were killed first?”

“3.”

The President’s expression became angry. “Those three were a family. A single family.” His voiced raised, “How could you let the killings go from a family of three to an army of thirteen hundred?!”

The soldier stood and shook, saying nothing. He looked closely at the President’s face, and saw a single tear fall down his cheek.

“I never thought it would come to this,” the President said. He sighed, with sorrow in his voice. “We have to surrender.”

Shock came across the soldier’s face. He knew the attacks would continue to get more vicious. He knew there weren’t many more left…

But, surrender hadn’t crossed his mind. Surrender meant death, and everyone left knew it.

“But, Sir!” The soldier protested.

“Stop.” The President cut him off. “It’s over.”

Comments

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  1. 1300 (Challenge By Numbers)

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh fantasy you went off the farm with this one. I was waiting for him to be the inca ruler facing Pizzaro man i was there. this is off the hay string good.

  2. 1300 (Challenge By Numbers)

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hey i thought i was the only ne who entered challenges after they were over, but fools seldom differ.lol

  3. 1300 (Challenge By Numbers)

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was brilliant! I think one of the most dramatic and descriptive scenes you’ve ever written!

  4. 1300 (Challenge By Numbers)

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was brilliant! I think one of the most dramatic and descriptive scenes you’ve ever written!

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