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“Put him back in the toilet till he talks.”
There are alot of things a person can think about when a 6’5” 350 LB drag queen named Simone is holding their head, under what used to be water, in a bathroom that makes a gutter-punk picnic look like an Amish baptism. Most people would be thinking about giving her royal himness the info she wanted.
I was way too stupid for that. The only image in my mind was the ‘Angel Who Had Fallen To Earth’ waiting for me at the room.
UGHHTAH
“Sugar ya ready to tell us where to get our stuff,this is gettin on my Prada Bag”
UGHHTAH
“Naw i need more time in the toilet.”
Good i needed more time to envision her lovely face. The way her lips weren’t aesthetically perfect, kind of like the panties from the dollar store. How i was in love with her dollar store panty bow tie lips. The way their most beautiful phrase could never be misinterpreted as olive juice. Her hair against me as she kissed me goodbye was spun obsidian against her milky bedroom skin.
“He quit movin”

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Bow Tie Lips(Hauntingly Beautiful Challenge)
Ana Cristina
Posted 3 months ago

Love the line, “Her hair against me as she kissed me goodbye was spun obsidian against her milky bedroom skin.” That’s poetry, man.
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thebetweenspace
Posted 3 months ago

Your writing style is so interesting. Hauntingly beautiful, you could say. Great word choices in painting the picture in this one.
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Apostrophe
Posted 3 months ago

ha ha a drag queen administering a swirly thats hilarious.. like the metaphor to a Amish baptism. Good stuff. the ending was quite poetic as well.. So I do have to agree with the others on that one.. there is an exotic beauty in your choice of words, and how you chose to use them.
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Mistress Elsha Hawk
Posted 3 months ago

aesthetically, this was perfectly written in a cruel imperfectly happy way. heh, I just wanted to let you know this is bizarre and you need to add an ‘a’ to aesthetically. :)
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Mighty-Joe Young
Posted 3 months ago

thank you Elsha i hope the contract killer bussiness is going good, and i will change that a asap.
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Music-Hearted
Posted 3 months ago

”...in a bathroom that makes a gutter-punk picnic look like an Amish baptism.”

I love that line. Nice job, it was very entertaining.
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LovingYourHeartbreak♥
Posted 3 months ago

woah, that was.. amazing. it was soo entertaining! and then.. he died? i was like ohhh shizzzz.
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Jenunique
Posted 3 months ago

Absolutely deranged.. in a good way. I loved it. All the way to “He quit movin’”, which I think is my favorite ending. I can just picture it so perfectly. (And what’s even more deranged- is the fact that I have Lestat’s Piano Sonata as background music. ;D)
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John Perkins
Posted 3 months ago

Ah, so this is the drag queen spoken of in the magazine from the other ficlet. Now I get it.
The line “naw, I need more time in the toilet,” reminds me of “The Big Lebowski.” Which is a good thing.
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chakatreatmentson!(LoA)
Posted 3 months ago

umm this story is funny cuz it could be true …if i weren’t pretty sure that the gossip would have got to me eventually i would say that it was…. but drag queen swirlies would have been too delicious not to talk about…