Possession [haiku]

by Ana Cristina

You loved my long hair.
Begged me never to cut it.
Now it’s mine again.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Possession [haiku]

    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 2 months ago

    OOO that’s great. Very empowering.

  2. Possession [haiku]

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love haiku, and it’s a shame that I can’t write any worth a darn. This one, however, is both noble and subdued. I, on the other hand, would have responded in her shoes with something much more tacky like “f—- off and die!”

  3. Possession [haiku]

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Three short lines and yet so much unpacked there. Like Eckhouse, I also appreciate a good haiku. (Random sidebar: my friend had a professor who trained his mind to listen in haiku. He would go to malls and places and write down overheard conversations in haiku form. Now, that’s taking love of haiku a bit bar, I think.)

  4. Possession [haiku]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    Haha, love that whole long hair vs. short hair debate/war/power struggle.

  5. Possession [haiku]

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is great. Three lines and its ahmazing. I haven’t read a good haiku on Ficlets but you’ve got the title now.

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