Long-Time Partners

by g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

He couldn’t believe the control she had of this car. She spun it around & sped straight to their pursuers.
“Are you kidding?!” he asked.
“Watch,” she answered through gritted teeth. At the last possible second, she veered to the left towards the highway & floored it.
At the first exit she pulled off & made a beeline for the closest alley. He finally took a deep breath.
“Did that really just happen? Seriously?” She smirked.
“Pinch yourself Romeo. It’s all real.” She leaned over & jabbed him in the arm. He winced slightly. Finally regaining composure, he reached down to examine the badge again.
“Wonder who’s this is?” he pondered aloud.
“Dunno.” She reached & picked up the gun, eyeing it carefully. “But whoever it is is gun-happy, lookit. The handle’s worn smooth.”
“Either that or they’ve been partners a long time.”
“Sure have.” The two jumped. near the hood was a slightly older man in a trench and scrunched fedora. He wore a slightly amused smirk. “This’s a gumshoe car, it’s not one of your caliber.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

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    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Hey nice use of the slang gumshoe.Another slang from that is era is rollers referring to cops in cars. I love colloquialism.

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    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I was sucked in from the beginning.. This turned out awesome.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    Quick turn of events. Funny how this series all started from a random sequel.

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    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 3 months ago

    @ THX : isn’t it, though? I think that’s how life works, really.

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    S. Lynn's Buddy Icon S. Lynn

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is coming along really good!

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    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Did I ruin it? No ome commented. :(

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    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    *one, not ome

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