The orphanage 5

by Twitch

On Saturday night, they sat, ready to go when they heard the music. Then, there it was. Courtney handed Sierra the crowbar and her and Vann wrenched the door open. They snuck out of the room, Courtney taking the lead. They tip-toed down the steps, and they saw it, the door. Their hearts were pounding with both fear and excitement. Could it really be that easy? Courtney smiled weakly, and with a trembling hand, turned the knob, and ripped it open. They all smelled the fresh night air, and all they could hear were the chriping crickets and the music from upstairs. Courtney held the door open and let everyone out, then they all jumped, the music stopped. They heard him come out of his room, probably to check on them in their room, except he won’t find them.

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    Posted 3 months ago

    PLEASE COMMENT !

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    Posted 3 months ago

    I love the suspense created in this ficlet. Cant wait to read more!

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    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    like the suspense tooo.

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