Passing Touch

by Zekkass

It was another mission – I sat quietly in the restaurant, waiting for him to make contact.

He was in a disguise, of course, and I didn’t see him until he sat across from me.

“I’m Peter.” He said, dragging from a cigarette. (I knew he hated cigarettes.) (That also wasn’t his name.)

I nodded. “Peter, it’s good to meet you.”

He smiled, and when the waiter came we ordered drinks and desserts. Discreetly – discreetly, mind you, he touched my hand and I felt the paper as well as the heat of his hand at the touch.

We carried on meaningless conversation about art, and when we left he winked at me and went in a different direction.

I held the paper in my hand, and imagined that I could still feel his fingers on my hand.

Comments

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    Ink_n_imp's Buddy Icon Ink_n_imp

    Posted 2 months ago

    I think I’m in love with the “Discreetly, mind you” line. That, and that it’s part spy story, part “romance” (possibly).

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    Zekkass' Buddy Icon Zekkass

    Posted 2 months ago

    Thanks! And yes, I am angling for romance in these at some point.

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    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    Very odd, but in a good way. I’m not sure you need the parens though. The story is in first person. If you want to do an internal thought, italics would work better.

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