To go in, or Not to go in! {Summer Vacation Challenge}

by S. Lynn

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“I am not going in there!” Dennis said, looking nervously at the brick building.

“Oh come on. are you really scared of a little doll?” Chrissy asked, lookig at the poster by the door. The poster had a large picture of a doll, and the writing above it said, “Robert the Doll! Now on display!“

“Its haunted! Can’t we got to the Shipwreck Museum, or Ripley’s Believe it or Not!, or even Hemmingway’s House?” Dennis asked.

“Please dear? We only come down here to the keys every other year! Last time we went to Ripley’s, and you saw how packed Hemmingway’s was!” Chrissy said, giving him the puppy dog eyes.

“Fine! You can go in to see this doll, but I’m not. I’ll be at the beach over there!” He said, nodding over to the small beach across the street. Right then the famous Conch Train drove past, tourist taking pictures of the musuem which was home to Robert.

“Okay, I will go in alone! But your missing some great stuff! I’ll make sure to get lotts of pictures!” She said, walking through the door.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. To go in, or Not to go in! {Summer Vacation Challenge}

    S. Lynn's Buddy Icon S. Lynn

    Posted 3 months ago

    Oh, i forgot to mention, this is in Key West Florida. And here’s a link to find out about Robert for you who don’t know! The second link is the best version of his background I can find!

    http://www.hauntedtours.com/Robert.html

    http://www.squidoo.com/dollrobert

  2. To go in, or Not to go in! {Summer Vacation Challenge}

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I sorta picked up on that myself.. So far so good.. this is a great opening story.. You really set the tone and the scene.. Good stuff!

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