Stitch in My Side [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]

by Ana Cristina

I shoved the gun in my back pocket and ran out of the room without a second look. This was a small condominium with paper-thin walls. Someone must have heard the bullet, and that someone was sure to call the cops.

I ran down the hall, not even bothering to shut the front door. After a second of deliberation, I decided to take the stairs – I was less likely to run into somebody and it led directly onto the street.

I didn’t even pause to breathe on the way down, despite the fact that I was coming from the fifth floor. Before I even reached the second floor, I developed a painful stitch in my side. Come on, you have to get out of here! Muscle through it!

At long last, I pushed through the door, almost falling onto the pavement.

Thankfully there was nobody around. The sun was setting and there was a bright red haze to everything. I bent forward at the waist, breathing hard. Refusing to think too much about what I’d just done. I had killed the man I once loved and now I would have to run forever as a result.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Stitch in My Side [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome set up here. Very interested to find out what led to the murder.

  2. Stitch in My Side [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree too. This was a really good read. A sequel would be interesting.

  3. Stitch in My Side [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is one of the ‘bestest’ challenges ever! I love getting the last chapter first and then finding out later why it all matters… So, let’s figure out what that man did to deserve death and why that woman is on the run. Little known fact about TBS : he reads magazines backwards, cover-to-cover.

  4. Stitch in My Side [egnellahC sdrawkcaB]

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted about 1 month ago

    dannnggg. im reading the sequel!

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