The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 6

by Writer4Life00nj

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“Omgee! He likes me I can tell. This is awesome, right?” said Massey on the way home. God, can she talk. Especially when she likes someone, which, is very rare.
“Yeah. totally. Crazy awesome!” I said in a flat tone.
“His eyes sparkle like, like…..the OCEAN ! Their as blue as the ocean, right?” I nodded. Thank god we pulled up at her house at that exact moment.
“BYE!” I said as I flung open the door.
“Talk to you on aim!” she called.
I starred out the window, trying to picture his face. It was impossible to get everything just right. His eyes weren’t sparkling the same as they did earlier that night. He wasn’t smiling the same, either. This was going to be a problem.

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  1. The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 6

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I know, you can’t really ever get everything on his face in you head, not perfectly. I sense some anger coming from her.
    LoA

  2. The Not So Secret, Everlasting Crush: Part 6

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    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol wow all you had to write was that she flung her out the car! I love how Massey is completely oblivious to Jess. Reminds me of a friend actually.

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