The First.

by Rae Belkcit (LoA)

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From Her Point of View
It was the first of December.
It was the first day of the last twelve days.
Of the world.
Forever.
Next to me, He stood. I love him. He loves me.
The Aztecs.
They predicted this. A very long time ago.
But hey.
What about that guy who predicted the holocaust?
He was right. Hopefully these guys aren’t. Everyone’s been going crazy for the last week or so. I’m scared. We’re just hiding in our apartment. No riots can get to us here.

I hope.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The First.

    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 2 months ago

    I love the pattern you wrote this in; it really caught my attention. I’m very intrigued and I want to read more!

    One thing- in the eighth line, I think you meant “they” instead of “the”. Great job, though!
    LoA

  2. The First.

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 2 months ago

    wow. this is really intriguing. Thanks so much for entering! I really liked the format of this.
    LoA

  3. The First.

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    Yes, the Mayan calendar ends in 2012. And so perhaps there will be mayhem as people go even more nuts over this than over Y2K . :) Wonder what the explosion was?? Just the Earth? The sun going Supernova?

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    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very interesting, Rae. I give you…five stars!

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