Peripheral Evil: Part 5- All's Well on the Sullen Home Front

by Jenunique

Sully’s father and mother looked at him with gaping mouths, afraid to blink or the moment would pass. Dad finally folded his arms across his chest and leaned back against the kitchen counter.

“Okay. I give up,” he started, “Who are you and what have you done with our son?”

Mom shushed him as she flung a dishtowel his way. She walked over to Sully and reached up to put her arm over his shoulder. Only fourteen and he’d already outgrown her, “I think it’s great that he’s found something that makes him like, this.”

She squeezed him and went back to washing the dishes when his older sister, Kara, walked through the door. “What’s wrong with your face?” she asked sardonically.

“It’s called a smile, buttmunch.” he snapped back, still smiling.

“Keep this up and we might have to re-name you. Something like, Cozy or Happy or,” her eyes glittered mischievously as she turned from the fridge, “Or G…

Before she could finish, Dad interrupted, “Don’t go there, Kara.”

“What?! I was going to say Goofy!”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Peripheral Evil: Part 5- All's Well on the Sullen Home Front

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    This was good.i think i got us out of pocket can you bring bring us back to the creepy fringe i am stuck in powerpuff girls land. HELP HELP I CANT GET BACK TO EVIL .LOL

  2. Peripheral Evil: Part 5- All's Well on the Sullen Home Front

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Buttmunch is such an awesome word. It’s up there with dingleberry in my book.

  3. Peripheral Evil: Part 5- All's Well on the Sullen Home Front

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ha ha. If they only knew…

  4. Peripheral Evil: Part 5- All's Well on the Sullen Home Front

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 3 months ago

    I think maybe I can get back to creeping evil. ;D

  5. Peripheral Evil: Part 5- All's Well on the Sullen Home Front

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great dialogue.

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