Oh So... +insert word here+ ((Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge))

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I turned onto my street and glanced at the clock. It was 9:52, only two minutes until curfew. I pulled my Focus into my driveway after a date with my boyfriend.

Tonight was the most romantic time of my 17 years of life. Jeremy had provided a candle lit dinner, which he cooked himself! He had on slow songs during and after dinner. We danced together after the meal. Then, to top it all off, before I left he told me he loved me for the first time! I have never heard three words sound more sincer then those.

I was almost to my room when I heard my dad’s voice call out.

“Grace? Is that you?”

“Yeah Dad. I just got home.” I answered as I steped into my room.

“Will you come to the living room. Your mother and I have something to tell you.” Slowly I walked into my living room and found my parents waiting. My mom spoke first.

“Honey. You father got a promotion!” She said excitedly.

Just as a smile was forming on my face my dad interupted with but we’re moving. which drained m face of all color.

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  1. Oh So... +insert word here+ ((Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge))

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 2 months ago

    Ya.. that’d suck!
    Well done!

  2. Oh So... +insert word here+ ((Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge))

    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Whoa…I’d be heartbroken if I were Grace. That’s just the perfect moment, shattered. Thanks for entering. : )

  3. Oh So... +insert word here+ ((Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge))

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh darn, I would hate that really bad! Good job!
    LoA

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh, that would be absolutely heartbreaking for a teen to have to go through especially in that fit of passionate puppy love. But, I guess it’s better than ‘we’re getting a divorce’ which was what I was expecting.

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    the next question is…how far? What horrible timing for a promotion!

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, that is one sad ending. Poor girl.

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