Mapping Algorithms

by Vonster

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The new “Replisuite” would have fooled him if he hadn’t been the one who installed the new tactic holo emitters. Since the new science movement discovery of spacial rifts, reality had quickly become the new fiction.

Looking through out the room he attempted to distinguish anything that would reveal his true location. He felt like he was at home, on his bed relaxing. This was good since he was actually on the 35th floor in a new suite at the “Jumeirah Emirates Towers” in Dubai.

His install seemed flawless, a perfect replication. He pushed a button on a nearby remote and said “Run “Eros Beta One.”

The room lights dimmed, soft music played and a floral scent graced the air. The bathroom door opened and out walked a tall, beautiful woman wearing a pink teddy. She was slowly combing her long black hair, her breasts swayed ever so slightly as she approached and spoke.

“More tests?”
“Yes.” Said the man grinning.
“What is it this time?” She said setting down the brush.
“We need to check your mapping algorithms.”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Mapping Algorithms

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Totally what every guy instantly thought of when they first saw the holodeck. Fun stuff.

  2. Mapping Algorithms

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with Mr. Perkins, awesome story. There were a couple typos in the 2nd to last paragraph, though. Should be ‘a beautiful woman’ and ‘She was slowly combing her long black hair’. Other than that, all I can say is pure incarnate awesomeness.

  3. Mapping Algorithms

    Vonster's Buddy Icon Vonster

    Posted 3 months ago

    Thanks for pointing out the typos. I depend too much on spell check which doesn’t notice improper use of correct spellings.

    I kind of had “Blade Runner” and “Star Trek” in mind.

  4. Mapping Algorithms

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    “Blade Runner” is exactly what I was reminded of, reading this. Great fic.

  5. Mapping Algorithms

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ditto the others.

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