Peripheral Evil: Part 7 The Long Walk

by Jenunique

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Sully was not looking forward to this anymore than he would have been looking forward to having someone stick hot needles into his corneas but he’d agreed to go with her.

They walked across the lawn side by side, Sully had his face turned down but his eyes looked over all the mourners gathered. There were so many of them. He wondered, fleetingly, if it were his own funeral, would he have even half this many people show up.

Then he spotted Rosalyn’s parents standing beside the closed casket. Her dad wept unconsolably while holding onto her mother. Her mother’s eyes were red and swollen but at the moment there were no tears. She stood stoically, gripping a red rose and a tissue.

The look she gave them should have knocked them both to the ground in writhing pain, or sudden death. Sully’s steps faltered and Rosalyn grasped his hand.

He turned to her and she nodded toward the gathering, “They’re waiting for us,” she said. They walked hand in hand to the opposite side of the casket, facing her parents.

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  1. Peripheral Evil: Part 7 The Long Walk

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That’s some look she gave them. Very well done.
    And needles in the corneas? Ouch.

  2. Peripheral Evil: Part 7 The Long Walk

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ok she is about to get midevil on annettes ass.

  3. Peripheral Evil: Part 7 The Long Walk

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome first line. This series keeps taking such unexpected turns. Off to read the sequel now.

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