Diary of a Teenage Runaway

by suspensetaken

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Dear Diary,
I’m cold and alone.
I haven’t found any place to stay..and I’m afraid.
Running away wasn’t my plan, but none of my plans seem to go so well anyways.
I’m searching.
I’m searching for food, searching for shelter, right now,..just searching for anything to keep me alive.
I feel lost. Hopeless. Ashamed.
I could be home, I could be safe and warm, hidden under my soft blankets,..my head resting on my fluffy pillow. But then it wouldn’t matter. I wouldn’t have the chance to fall asleep anyways. I would be kept awake listening to the cries of my mom and the bellowing voice of my dad.

But this was better.

I have nothing right now,..except the calmness of the sea beside me and the quietness of the ground beneath me. I can hear myself breathe, and I can fall asleep peacefully.

But its much harder to survive then I had ever imagined.

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Diary of a Teenage Runaway

    suspensetaken's Buddy Icon suspensetaken

    Posted 3 months ago

    I think this is more of an event that happened after something.. so feel free to write prequels about how she got to this place and more about why she ran away.

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 3 months ago

    this could go oh so many places; with prequels or sequels.
    anyway, i think the emotions of the character were portrayed nicely, and you gave just the right amount of information to the reader.
    =]

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 3 months ago

    hahahaha… i just noticed something..
    it’s kinda funny.=D
    the title reads: The Dairy of a Teenage Runaway.
    XD

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    suspensetaken's Buddy Icon suspensetaken

    Posted 3 months ago

    oh oops ill change it

  5. Diary of a Teenage Runaway

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 3 months ago

    Nice portrayal of what could happen in this situation, and how the girl would write about it.

  6. Diary of a Teenage Runaway

    Laine the Grey's Buddy Icon Laine the Grey

    Posted 3 months ago

    This is one I definitely want to follow.

  7. Diary of a Teenage Runaway

    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted 3 months ago

    This is a good series so far. I like it and I definitely will read them all. keep writing (:

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    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    i have a russ meter movie by the same name

  9. Diary of a Teenage Runaway

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    meyer i meant

  10. Diary of a Teenage Runaway

    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted 3 months ago

    this is good :]
    reminds me alot of
    Go Ask Alice

  11. Diary of a Teenage Runaway

    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the way you contrasted the character’s home with her present state, it forces the reader to wonder which would really be better.

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 3 months ago

    I agree with RainDance, wondering which would be better.

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