Pleasure Principle

by Ana Cristina

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Sassy winced as a twig dug into her back. Paul mistook her gasp of pain for pleasure and deepened his kiss.

She gripped his hair and wrenched his head back. “Hey, you don’t have to swallow my tongue!”

“Sorry, I won’t do it again.”

“That’s better,” Sassy hissed and pulled him close to her again.

They were rolling onto the lawn now, past the hydrangea bushes, in danger of crushing the prized rose patch when the unmistakable sound of sirens reached them.

“Oh, crap. I already have a record. I can’t get arrested, I can’t get arrested!” Paul leaped up, pushing Sassy aside.

“What’s your problem, Paul! It’s not like you have any drugs on you or anything,” Sassy laughed, as she sat up and began pulling twigs out of her curls.

Paul laughed nervously. “I, uh, really should get going. It’s kind of late.”

Just as he was turning to leave, an iron fist grabbed his wrist.

“Just where do you think you’re going, baby? You still owe me.”

Just then a policeman pulled up. “What seems to be the problem, civilians?“

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  1. Pleasure Principle

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You could not have read my mind better on this one! I was hoping a certain police officer would arrive first to the scene. ;) But I wonder what’s on Paul’s record that’s got him squirming like that. Awesomeness!

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    Hey, great minds do think alike, amigo!

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    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 3 months ago

    Haha civilians, that’s going to be interesting.

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    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 3 months ago

    ohh no..

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You got sequel. And it’s about to get ugly.

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    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 3 months ago

    i hate it when i get sticks in my hair

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    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great bit of interaction here. Loved the dialog, and the “swallow my tongue” comment. I’m more of a slobberer than a tongue swallower, but I can somewhat relate. =P
    I do have a problem with the italics on “going” in that second to last paragraph. It feels more like the emphasis should be on “you’re.” I think it reads better that way. I’m having a hard time putting the emphasis on “going.” Is it just me?

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    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol I absolutely loved the last line

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