Requests

by Chocobo Prime

I knocked on the third floor bedroom door, again. Everyday for the last three years, two months and four days I have knocked on this door, this old door. My knock’s have never been answered. Before today that is.

I inherited this house from my Great Aunt May, whom I had previously never met or really even heard of. I’ve been told she was very fond of my mother, but still, giving me a house like this seemed weird. It’s a very big house though, and for the most part it’s only about nine years old. I wasn’t going to complain that I didn’t deserve it.

With the keys and the deed the executor of the will gave me a list of instructions which I was asked to follow whenever I stayed in the house.
Foremost among these was my previously mentioned task. I also have to leave a bowl of milk outside the kitchen’s backdoor every night, water the odd plants in the inner court yard the gardener doesn’t visit, and a half dozen other odd little things.

They’re a dead woman’s last requests, it’s the least I can do.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Requests

    Fantasy's Buddy Icon Fantasy

    Posted 2 months ago

    very interesting and very cool.

    i’d like to see a sequel!!!!

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    and who’s (or what’s) behind the door?? Intriguing. I like the odd set up here. A garden only the character can visit, a stray cat(?), and a door to knock on, all in a fairly new house..or is it?

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    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with Fantasy: I’d love to a sequel to this..
    It’s a great start – you paint a great picture here.

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    Chocobo Prime's Buddy Icon Chocobo Prime

    Posted 2 months ago

    Thanks for the comments. I’ll try to write a sequel up tonight.

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