Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

by chakatreatmentson!(LoA)

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    real shit!!! but you are going to get kicked off dang you didnt have bring out trick baby.

  2. Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    as a female the whole rental property sort of irked me.. but none the less.. it was a very colorful written story.

  3. Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yeah, gotta say title was offensive, didn’t really connect with the character and glad you marked it mature,, It’s not to my taste, but good luck and all. a lot of mispelled words, made it a difficult read. sorry.

  4. Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m also confused by the title as I don’t see where it fits in with the story. Though, I’m probably missing something.
    However, I absolutely loved “sci-fi punky brewster lookin ass.”

  5. Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 2 months ago

    I also found the title a little offensive… and I don’t really see how it connects.

    I’m with Apostrophe on this… as a female, I found it a little irritating. It’s not really my style, but thanks for contributing to Ficlets…

  6. Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

    chakatreatmentson!(LoA)'s Buddy Icon chakatreatmentson!(LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    ...A note on the title- it’s a play on words parody of a song lyric. The last words of the prequel were “Queers to the left of me , junkies to the right…”the sequels tirtle follows “here i am stuck in the middle with jews”get it – a bad pun…
    I hope it makes a bit more sense now (but it wasn’t ever supposed to be terribly logical, its kind of an inside gag for an audience of one)-sorry if i offended…

  7. Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted about 1 month ago

    hey listen i know ya’ll wont believe this but this a real true story real talk i was there it really happened i swear. What should really be offensive is she answered to trick baby

  8. Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted about 1 month ago

    hey ya’ll are not taking into account that chaka is a female.

  9. Here I am stuck in the middle with jews

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted about 1 month ago

    hey how do i get back to the simone story oh never i found it

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