You May Be Right

by Laine P. Grey

“You may be right,” Leyna sighed, as she placed the bowls in the cupboard. “You always are.” Somehow, the words weren’t hers.
Russell shrugged. “I’m just saying, no sister of mine is gonna sit at home every weekend.” It’s the thought that counts.
Leyna pushed her black hair away from her face. She had cut it short years ago, for some reason. She’d said something about it being easier to manage. That was a joke.
“You ever consider the possibility that I’m crazy?” she teased her brother.
“Plenty of times; come to tomorrow night, please?” He begged.
“I have to check with Richie,” Leyna nodded. “We might be doing something.”
Russell filled his cheeks with air and let it out slowly. “Fine, call me and let me know.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. You May Be Right

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Did you mean “cut” when you said “count”? Just curious. Otherwise, very nice dialogue.
    LoA

  2. You May Be Right

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    This would read better on screen with a blank line between paragraphs. Other than that, I think you have some nice dialog in here. Fun little back and forth between siblings.

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