The New Boy, The Old Boy, and The Present Boy: Part 5

by Smile4life!

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“What was that about?”
Joey came up to me after class.
“I’m sorry!”
“You shouldn’t be looking at other boys when you have a boyfriend!”
“I’m sorry! He was just cute!”
“Oh, really? Cuter then me?”
“How selfcentered are you? What do you think you the cutest boy in school or something?”
He was but, you know what I mean!
“Yea maybe I do!”
“Well he may not have been as cute as you, but he was probably a lot nicer then you!
“Maybe then he can be your boyfriend then!”
He stomped off.
“Come back Joey! Please!”
He looked back at me and ran off.

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  1. The New Boy, The Old Boy, and The Present Boy: Part 5

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    Posted 3 months ago

    Joey needs to grow up just a little bit cuz there’s no way that he’s not looking at all the cute girls around him just cuz he has a gf. It goes against human nature. Again, you can look but don’t touch. There’s nothing wrong with looking and if Joey can’t realize this then she needs to dump him.
    Anyways, I’m really starting to like this series I just wish you’d have made this part a little longer. Maybe they could have argued more to heighten the drama. Otherwise great job!

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