Welcome to the Neighborhood [Willy Wonka Challenge]

by OrangeOreos

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Mrs. Jones stared out of her window on to the calm street deep in the Chicago suburbs. Her petunias had begun to wilt in the hot June sun. She would have to remember to water them later today.

Across the street, she watched the moving van pull away from a house almost identical to her own.

“Boys! Come downstairs!” she yelled up the stairway, “It’s time to go and welcome our new neighbors!”

She grabbed the plate of fresh chocolate chip cookies from the kitchen counter, and headed across the street with her two scraggly teenage sons in tow.

As she knocked on the door, she looked at her two sons to remind them of their manners. Both of them rolled their eyes, and the younger one whispered, “We remember what you told us, mom.”

Mrs. Jones nodded curtly, and quickly turned towards the opening door. She looked over her new neighbor, a very anxious and happy busy-body housewife.

Extending the cookies to her new neighbor, Mrs. Jones smiled her most welcoming smile.

“Welcome to the neighborhood!”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Welcome to the Neighborhood [Willy Wonka Challenge]

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 3 months ago

    This probably isn’t extremely dark for most people, but for some reason, I’ve always been paranoid about new neighbors…

  2. Welcome to the Neighborhood [Willy Wonka Challenge]

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Did anybody else sing “Mrs. Jones,” imitating Adam Duritz from Counting Crowes, at the first line? Just me? Ok, carry on.
    I always thought when I moved into a house it would be like tv. Where all the neighbors are friends and such, but you know, I never really go outside. And I do find it creepy when people come to my door just for the heck of it.
    Fun read, and I give you mad props for stepping up to the plate on this challenge.

  3. Welcome to the Neighborhood [Willy Wonka Challenge]

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 3 months ago

    she seems creepy to me.

  4. Welcome to the Neighborhood [Willy Wonka Challenge]

    suspensetaken's Buddy Icon suspensetaken

    Posted 3 months ago

    very creepy

  5. Welcome to the Neighborhood [Willy Wonka Challenge]

    S. Lynn's Buddy Icon S. Lynn

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh! Very nice! And creepy! I’ve never really enjoyed neighbors, since the two apartments next door have a tendancy for getting the freaks… Not the current ones though, they’re very nice. Great entry!

  6. Welcome to the Neighborhood [Willy Wonka Challenge]

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    there’s something in that look the mother gave and the fact that she drug her two teenage boys over with her….

  7. Welcome to the Neighborhood [Willy Wonka Challenge]

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 2 months ago

    One of my neighbors rarely goes outside of his house, doesn’t have much furniture inside his house, which is fairly largeish, hires a company to do his lawn, and drives a black car with tinted windows. He is also seen carrying mysteriously large trash bags outside to the curb at midnight.
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    Okay, so that last part was made up. But anyway, I got the underlying, somewhat creepy tone in here. It’s very subtle, and it changes the way you read it.

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