Seize the Moment

by Stout

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Seize the Moment

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The end is made all the more horrifying by the clever, misleading set-up. You truly believe Jim is in love with his woman. That last sentence is killer, by the way (pun not intended – well, OK, maybe it should be).

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    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    It inspired a reverse perspective out of me.
    I loved this..
    Consider this sequeled

  3. Seize the Moment

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great twist. And I love twists. Very well done.

  4. Seize the Moment

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, that was quite awesome! I didn’t see it coming at all.

  5. Seize the Moment

    Wendy's Buddy Icon Wendy

    Posted 3 months ago

    i didnt see it coming, but it was sad :\

  6. Seize the Moment

    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Holy stromboli, I never would have guessed that. Incredible.

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    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    What a twisted guy.

    You do believe he loves her, and then WHAM ! he kills her.

    Awesome.

  8. Seize the Moment

    Smile4life!'s Buddy Icon Smile4life!

    Posted 2 months ago

    OMG ! HaHa! This was well orginized with a great twist! Very good job!

  9. Seize the Moment

    Tootiemarroo's Buddy Icon Tootiemarroo

    Posted 2 months ago

    LOL .
    Loved it. High five Jim for me, will ya?

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