I Will Shout it Out!

by Blusparrow

Today you told me
Three words
I never thought
You would ever say it!

I never thought
We would be
Here together
But here you are.

I should have told you
Right then and there
I was too stunned,
Too shocked.

I have never
ever felt this way
I see your face
In everyone.

Now I am ready
To say it lond
Shout it proud
To the world!

I love you
I really do
I always will
Forever and ever.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. I Will Shout it Out!

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very cute. I liked it. One minor tweak: it should read “should have,” not “should of.”
    I hope this is based on a true story! ;)

  2. I Will Shout it Out!

    Laine the Grey's Buddy Icon Laine the Grey

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very sweet.

  3. I Will Shout it Out!

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    I wished so Ana, but sadly no…
    LoA

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