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Epilogue: Breaking Dawn

It was a typical day in Forks: rain, and lots of it. But I knew Bella had to go hunting soon, no matter the weather.

She was in pain, though she would never admit it. She feigned bravery, but I knew by her taut mouth that she was suffering, enduring the sensation of her blood vessels constricting, the venom coursing in her veins. It had been a century since my change but I still remembered the pain, how it felt like fire burning in my veins.

This was the process every fledgling vampire had to endure. This was our torment, but happily it never lasted more than three days.

The first day I did nothing but hold her in my arms, trying to keep her immobile while the waves of pain washed over her, rocking her to and fro. It was a strange sensation, holding my erstwhile breakable Bella, suddenly become more powerful than me. It took all my strength to hold her down. Emmett offered to help, but I allowed no one to come near.

I had been the one to change her, and I would be the one to guide her down this path.

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Epilogue: Breaking Dawn
Ana Cristina
Posted 3 months ago

For all you Twilight fans out there, there is a contest to write the Epilogue to BD from another character’s perspective. I’m trying it out here first, before I enter.
To learn more, go here:
http://twilightseriestheories.com/tst-contest
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penguincaptain18
Posted 3 months ago

That was great! I totally love it! Thanks for reminding me how absolutely wonderful Edward is! (can’t wait for Midnight Sun! and BD and the movie!!!!)
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AwkwardlyReversed
Posted 3 months ago

i think im going to start this er twilight series. my entire school is reading and talking about so i might as well see whats so special about it. from what you wrote, which was awesome, the book sounds chill.
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Laine the Grey
Posted 3 months ago

Yes yes yes yes yes!
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thebetweenspace
Posted 3 months ago

Okay, I’m not familiar with Twilight, so what you do here will have a major role in deciding whether or not I investigate it further. (Not to put any pressure on you or anything).

Great start. I loved the last line.
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OrangeOreos
Posted 2 months ago

Bella got changed into a vampire?

Since when?

I’m not a big fan of the series (Only read the first one, and it probably shows) but this was pretty good.

You should write a book, Ana!
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blueeyes01031
Posted 2 months ago

ome this is amazing…this would make the perfect epilogue. =))
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Freedom :]
Posted 2 months ago

OMG this is so great! Great job! I agree with the above: it would make an amazing epilogue.
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THX 0477
Posted 2 months ago

I liked the painful transition to vampire described here and the little hints at how the relationship dynamics would be changing.
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Stovohobo
Posted 2 months ago

Fan fiction! Yay! (That was sarcasm, if you must know, but you’re forgiven since it’s much better than the fourteen-year-olds who post on DeviantART).
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No, really, I liked this ficlet. I’ve never read the books, and I assume this is sort of a spoiler anyway. Great descriptions and such.
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madwriter108
Posted 2 months ago

very gripping and intense….very good character-to-character relationship….
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Apostrophe
Posted 2 months ago

beautifully written.. don’t know much about vampires and things of that sort. The descriptions you wrote with were absolutely beautiful.. This story has a haunting quality to it.. just by the way you wrote and illustrated the story.. very cool photo to match.. Bravo!!
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<3 2 write
Posted 2 months ago

that was so good where did you learn to right like that keep going you can do more
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music.is.life.
Posted 2 months ago

ahh!!!
i went to the Breaking Dawn release last night!!!!
it was so incredibly fun.
i don’t get my book for another week or so, but still.
i feel like such a nerd but i love the Twilight series.!!!
i can’t wait for the movie to come out so i can see how well they portrayed the books.

but….
you definetly did a good job with this one.
kudos.
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Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3
Posted 2 months ago

Ooooh, I love this, I went to the release, but didn’t have money to buy it, but I do love the series. This would be an excellent epilogue to Breaking Dawn. [[Apparently, my friends are major spoilers that gasp at everything]]
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Misheru O'ku
Posted 2 months ago

Wow, you write beautiful prose. It captivated my attention right away.