Approaching Bella

by Ana Cristina

For some reason my steps slowed as I reached the clearing. As though I was preparing myself physically and mentally for approaching Bella.

I knew she needed time, and I was willing to give her that, but not here, out in the open where she could be hurt. I quickly thought of some counter-arguments for whatever argument she might pose, remembering all too well her stubborn streak.

She was lying on the grass almost in the exact place where we’d both lain that first time. Her arms were extended on either side, her dark hair fanning out behind her. Even in the near darkness of the encroaching evening, I could see the intense sparkle of her eyes, one of her newly acquired assets after the change.

“Bella?” I whispered, knowing she would hear me.

She lifted her head and smiled at me. This heartened me – it was as though she had never left and was still the same sunny Bella.

“I’d forgotten how peaceful it was here, Edward. Only I can hear everything now, even the bugs in the grass. Is it like that for you, too?”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Approaching Bella

    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    What?! Where’s the rest?! I need more. I really really liked it. You did a great job. I can totaly see this as part of the Edward side of BD.

  2. Approaching Bella

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 3 months ago

    okay, I just now read the whole thing!
    I totally appreciate that you’ve read the books what? maybe, three or four times each?? You have this down! I can’t wait for Breaking Dawn, and of course, your next sequel!!

  3. Approaching Bella

    Laine the Grey's Buddy Icon Laine the Grey

    Posted 3 months ago

    Oh, Edward!
    Brilliant job, Ana! My friend is reading this currently, and she says you did an amazing job, and you understand how Stephenie’s mind works!

  4. Approaching Bella

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    @ Elsha, oh come on, I’ve only read the books twice each. ;)
    Thanks for the comments! Working on a sequel now…

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