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Prince William, I thank you! [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]

I am in a bad mood today. My friend for some reason stabbed me in the back, somebody stole my wallet, my boyfriend broke up with me, I just found out that the same person who stole my wallet as already spent two thousand dollars on my debit card, must I continue?

Oh, and you must not forget the topping, I’m locked out of my house and its pouring down rain. So here I am, sitting on my front steps, my cloths and hair soaked, waiting for my phychotic mother to drive 15 miles to let me into my own house. I officailly declare today the worst day of my life!

I don’t have any money, no way to get into my house for the next half an hour, and not even anyone to complain to. What good is that!?

Wait, is that Prince William walking up the street? And all his body guards? Where is his limo? Oh, it broke down at the corner, ok. Man, not even the prince is having a good day. Oh my gosh! The Prince of Wales just fell! He just slipped! Thats is so funny!

I guess this perfectly horrible day is now ruined!

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Prince William, I thank you! [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]
Mask By The Moon
Posted 3 months ago

Interesting take on the challenge. NOt sure if it’s good or bad yet.
Prince William, I thank you! [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]
ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫
Posted 3 months ago

Well, no one said that ‘perfect’ had to be a good thing. If 100% of the things that you do in a day have gone bad, then it’s a perfectly bad day.
To have something funny break that average to 95% bad day – i’d say that’s ruining a perfect average.
Very interesting twist.
Prince William, I thank you! [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]
John Perkins
Posted 3 months ago

Very creative turn on the challenge. I enjoyed it. You’ve got a couple typos in there, but overall really enjoyable.
I love it when people turn a challenge like this on its head.
Prince William, I thank you! [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]
thebetweenspace
Posted 3 months ago

I like the reverse angle on perfection. It reminded me a little of last football season when the Dolphins could have had a perfect losing season, but ruined it by pulling out a win late in the season.
Prince William, I thank you! [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]
BARomero
Posted 3 months ago

I also liked how you flipped this one. TBS , I suppose the Dolphins were the Pats’ exact opposite last year then. Someone should do a ficlet about this year’s Super Bowl then…
Prince William, I thank you! [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]
NightMaiden
Posted 3 months ago

I really like the way you turned the moment around and made it from horrible to wonderful. Thank you very much for entering! : )
Prince William, I thank you! [Perfect Moment Ruined Challenge]
S. Lynn
Posted 2 months ago

@ TBS amd BARomero – A little off of football, but just this week when the Cleveland Indians could of had a perfect 10-game losing streak, and won a game which would have been number ten! Curse them!