Get what you give

by Mask By The Moon

Add to AIMShare

I tightened my grip on the club, looking around my backyard to make sure I was still alone. I stared at the frightened face, the orange hair messy, fear in the once scornful brown eyes.

“You get what you give,” I muttered angrily.

I tightened my grip more, my knuckles turning white. I pulled the club back out of my own field of vision and swung with everything I had, all energy going straight into my arms and sending the head off in an explosion of dust and grass. It landed in the pool with a small yet satisfying splash.

Golfing at home is quite relaxing when you imagine the ball as the head of your enemy. Really is, try it.

Prequels

Write a prequel

Sequels

Write a sequel

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Get what you give

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    All red heads are insane, and make for great enemies. And as someone who still has a scar on his face from being hit with a golf club, I can tell you it’s a great way to beat your enemy.
    I thoroughly enjoyed this. Great descriptions, and it was simply fun.
    I am somewhat confused by the ball landing in the pool though. I’d expect it to fly outside the backyard with that sort of force. Unless it’s a whiffle ball. I used to practice with those and they don’t go very far, but don’t splash either.

  2. Get what you give

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 3 months ago

    I was using a wiffle ball, and when I was outside getting inspiration for this ficlet, mine landed in the pool and made a very—VERY— small splash, but it splashed nonetheless.

  3. Get what you give

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You are correct, again. They do splash.

  4. Get what you give

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great fic. I’ve never been golfing, unless you count miniature golf. I need to try it while envisioning my enemy’s head getting hit. That just adds a whole new level of fun to the game! :p

  5. Get what you give

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    this is really tight ficlet mrs moonie

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!