Waiting for the Page to Turn

by [pens&feathers]

If this was a love story, you would show up on my front steps in the middle of the night, or throw rocks at my window (without breaking it), or hold a boombox over your head and play my favorite song. You would sweep the hair out of my face, kiss me perfectly and tell me you loved me all along.

If this was an adventure, we would be on a quest, both in the literal and metaphorical sense. We would be searching. And when we found the treasure, or the culprit, or the missing child, you would hold my hand, hug me. You’d say we made a great team.

If this was a drama, one of us would be sick. One of us would be facing unspeakable adversity. One of us would come up against the odds. But we would make it through, because stories like these usually come with a happily ever after.

But as I watch you drive away, headlights blinking on, I wonder where you could catagorize us, this story. We are more than a summer story, a fluffy beach read.

Your car disappears around a corner.

I wait for the page to turn.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Waiting for the Page to Turn

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    WOW !!! This is poetic!! This is awesome!
    I’m looking for anything - anything at all - to critique – and i can find nothing wrong with this ficlet.

    5 stars!! Fantastic. Best i’ve read today.

  2. Waiting for the Page to Turn

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Truly an awesome story. The last line was awesome. Being a moron, I was thinking of this in terms of movies (though you did use the Say Anything reference).
    The last line was really beautiful. Well done.

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