Third Person

by Never Explain

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“Mmph!!!” I tryed to yell over my choker, but that guy was walking towards me while his eyes seemed to rake and bore into me as far as his fangs were about to.

Wait…his fangs?

There was no way this was real, no effing way.

I must have passed out or something after that, but I still remembered exactly what happened, but from a third person sort of perspective.

Marl almost got me, but Helena flew at him and dug a handful of suddenly long and razor-sharp fingernails into his face, with her eyes completely drowned out in red and black bat-like wings spread out, dragging him back.

The fight ensued. Helena clawed at Marl while he delivered harshly blunt blows. There was no blood, though, only ashes.

I didn’t see the end of it, but the next thing I knew I was lying in my bed next to a beaten-up-looking Helena.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Third Person

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That is interesting. She loves him so much that she fought her own partner so he could live. How romantic, in an odd sort of way.
    LoA

  2. Third Person

    music.is.life.'s Buddy Icon music.is.life.

    Posted about 1 month ago

    ahh this seriously needs to be sequelled!!!!!
    i am dying to know what happens.!

  3. Third Person

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Lolz. I agree with Blu.
    LoA

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    Whinney's Buddy Icon Whinney

    Posted about 1 month ago

    i agree with all of u

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