In the Half-Light

by Ana Cristina

“He’s your father, Bella. He’d be more suspicious if you didn’t visit him.”

“How about when he starts to get old and I still look the same? Don’t you think he’d get suspicious then?”

“I’ve thought about that. You know how Alice loves doing makeovers? And you’ve seen what they’ve been able to do with actors in film. You could age. Artificially, of course.”

I waited for her to come up with another counterargument, but to my great surprise, she didn’t.

“That’s so crazy, it just might work,” she whispered, then flung her arms around me and kissed me firmly on the mouth. I kissed her back just as firmly, reveling in the physical sensation for once rather than worrying about hurting her.

After a long, luxurious interval, she lifted her head, a dreamy look in her bright eyes. The wedding ring on her finger glimmered in the half-light, but it didn’t hold a candle to her eyes.

“I love you, Edward,” she said simply.

“I’ll always love you, Bella.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. In the Half-Light

    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I want to cry from how awesome that scene is! I love how you show that he finally doesn’t have to worry about hurting her physically. Fabulous job!!!!!!! I beg you! Please keep going!!!

  2. In the Half-Light

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    OK, I just might… I’m working on something in Word because I need to keep track of the word count. The contest doesn’t accept stories that are more than 5,000 words in length.

  3. In the Half-Light

    Laine the Grey's Buddy Icon Laine the Grey

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    A contest? Well, anyway, I’m surprised that “new Bella” agreed to any kind of makeover, especially one done by Alice.

  4. In the Half-Light

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Fantastic line: I kissed her back just as firmly, reveling in the physical sensation for once rather than worrying about hurting her.

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